Students got a chance to see their Narrative Interview Rough Drafts and to begin working on the revision process. Many students are in a great place with their work. The basic shifts they need to take in their writing are: changing the subject from the interviewer to the interviewee, making the coming of age moment more relevant, revising for redundant ideas.
Students - if you would like to have me look at your paper again, please follow the below steps.
1) Revise your work
2) Share it with me via google docs
3) In the notes, please let me know what you would like to me to do with your paper.
If these steps are followed, I will be happy to re-read your paper and give you my suggestions.
There is some extra credit opportunities coming up for 1A, 3A, and 3B
1) Turn in your final draft by Saturday, November 12, 2016 by 11:59pm for an extra 5 pts
2) Take a selfie with a band member at Friday's fundraiser. Sicilian Thing Pizza, 4046 30th Street, San Diego Ca, 92104. Show me your picture on Nov. 15 during class for an extra 5 pts.